F’king Fabulous …Thank you 😘…had me throbbing and squirming in equal measure! 🍆😊😜

Enjoyed this writing. Emotional, descriptive and thought provoking!

I love this line,
“Came on tiptoe to take away our last figments of dreams”

Really nice imagery

Thank you. Love, Lizzie

Nice surprise at the end of this. This guy is a typical player. I’ve known several. They lose their magical sheen, not when you lie down with them, but you have to get up.

This is a massively descriptive narrative. Not much action. The one thing I do like is that you fully enunciate the details of ‘that guy’ nobody can own or hold… the super beautiful specimens who possess what it takes to get anyone they want at any time they want them. They are not the guys you marry, because you end up regretting it. They are the guys you FUCK, then go back home to your faithful partner with your panties in your purse and a quiet memory.

yup… listen to Dampkitten… with a few panties in her purse, she definitely knows what she is talking about…nice one

Intriguing poem, fabulous descriptions.
Some great comments from the other writers in crime.

Thank you.

Thank you.

That is freaking great! Very awesome.

“the greatest of sins in the dark districts of casual encounters..”
An amazing line with emphatic alliteration.

Wow, thank you.
Love. Lizzie,

Thank you.
Love, Lizzie

Aren’t we all…
Amazing poetry as usual Liz

Fricking sublime. Like DampKitten, I agree the dark districts of casual encounters is a powerful resonating image. Though there are succinct gems throughout this heartfelt poem: treasured moments faded by ruthless hours and sexual renewal in furious orgasms. Awesome poem,

i think you might just be forgiven!

Thank you for your kindness.

I think you had this up on the other side. I seem to remember it.
For me, the delivery would be more intimate in first person. It’s otherwise hard to empathize with this ‘player’.

Yes,maybe I published it before in Silk.
Tell you what, I don´t want anyone to empathize with this player!
Thanks for your words.
Love, Lizzie,

It seems guys and gals are all like that in this time and age. No caring for anyone’s feeling but their own

Thank you so much! Love, Lizzie.

Sounds like she is as loose and easy as he is… maybe trying to convince herself that this is what she wanted.

Such a curious creature…