Nicely horny writing, thank you 😎😈

Nice surprise at the end of this. This guy is a typical player. I’ve known several. They lose their magical sheen, not when you lie down with them, but you have to get up.

This is a massively descriptive narrative. Not much action. The one thing I do like is that you fully enunciate the details of ‘that guy’ nobody can own or hold… the super beautiful specimens who possess what it takes to get anyone they want at any time they want them. They are not the guys you marry, because you end up regretting it. They are the guys you FUCK, then go back home to your faithful partner with your panties in your purse and a quiet memory.

yup… listen to Dampkitten… with a few panties in her purse, she definitely knows what she is talking about…nice one

Intriguing poem, fabulous descriptions.
Some great comments from the other writers in crime.

Thank you.

Thank you.

Wow, you must be hungry! That is some complicated cooking, babe. Definitely upscale. I’m impressed with your knowledge. Quite a metaphorical journey into the passion of tasting and eating. Interesting analogy using the jars at the beginning of your story.

I’m pushing a few things back through the Sam series (literally and literately), so Sam 1 has a much bigger intro now, which leads into Sam 2 in the kitchen after their shower!! etc

That is freaking great! Very awesome.

“the greatest of sins in the dark districts of casual encounters..”
An amazing line with emphatic alliteration.

Wow, thank you.
Love. Lizzie,

Thank you.
Love, Lizzie

Aren’t we all…
Amazing poetry as usual Liz

Fricking sublime. Like DampKitten, I agree the dark districts of casual encounters is a powerful resonating image. Though there are succinct gems throughout this heartfelt poem: treasured moments faded by ruthless hours and sexual renewal in furious orgasms. Awesome poem,

i think you might just be forgiven!

Thank you for your kindness.