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Hi . Music is probably a bit dated. Not sure that Dua Lipa would work so well though!
I tend to “bank” the songs when I’m listening to the radio btw!
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Wow, so I get to make the first comment.
You’re an excellent writer, and this is extremely romantic. I love how you intertwine the opulent atmosphere with food and sex. You have upscale experience in all departments. The imagery is fab. The food is exquisite. The drinks are maybe a little over the top for your average person with an average liver (many of us average folk would be on the floor)… but it works for the story. This is Cinderella level fantasy with an erotic twist. I read your first story, so I kind of know the backdrop on the relationship.
The music you mention is slightly dated, which is a casual observation on my part. I know these songs, but mainly from the office soft rock settings. I will say that I love literature that mentions music as a way of emphasizing mood and era. I think it works well in your piece. Your vocabulary is extensive and descriptive. This is a pleasurable read.
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