Enjoyed this writing. Emotional, descriptive and thought provoking!

crap… you’re a witch.. I’m mesmerized with this story.

I’m so glad you like it, Fia. Thanks for reading!

Captivating, dark and dirty. Fabulous!

I love this line,
“Came on tiptoe to take away our last figments of dreams”

Really nice imagery

Thank you. Love, Lizzie

THOSE are the EXPLICIT images I was talking about earlier…. those that make me cringe and cum.
You are definitely going to get me in jail… which one I don’t know yet.

To SAM
Oh, those images!

To Fia
Thanks for the thermometer! I’m so glad you liked.

embarrassingly arousing! :-0

I used to ooze like that! Nice work.

Nice surprise at the end of this. This guy is a typical player. I’ve known several. They lose their magical sheen, not when you lie down with them, but you have to get up.

This is a massively descriptive narrative. Not much action. The one thing I do like is that you fully enunciate the details of ‘that guy’ nobody can own or hold… the super beautiful specimens who possess what it takes to get anyone they want at any time they want them. They are not the guys you marry, because you end up regretting it. They are the guys you FUCK, then go back home to your faithful partner with your panties in your purse and a quiet memory.

yup… listen to Dampkitten… with a few panties in her purse, she definitely knows what she is talking about…nice one

Intriguing poem, fabulous descriptions.
Some great comments from the other writers in crime.

Thank you.

Thank you.

Thank you, Maxine. I love your comment!

Meg, you make me tumescent. Just keep rubbing me! Your story is freaking amazing!

Thank you, Maxine. I’m so glad you liked it.

Scorching ! Oh my… that was some dream!