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May 26, 2024

Dark Thrill at the Capital Grille“There she goes again.”“What?” Sam looked at me innocently, sipping his whiskey with the last bite of steak.“You know what, so stop acting stupid.” I kicked him playfully beneath the table and regarded him slyly. ...

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Toro
2 years ago

Oooff! Wow… hot, dirty, degrading, depraved and appallingly captivating!
- DampKitten
  2 years ago
  
  Wow, I bet I could sell it with that review on the cover! Thank you! Glad you liked it.
Atticus Abbey
2 years ago

Oh! Gee whizz. Your imagination leaves me naked. Great writing.
- DampKitten
  2 years ago
  
  Wow, thanks! Not sure if you read the short version on DUP – this is the extended unedited piece. Not sure they could handle it over there. Sometimes I go out on a ledge, as you well know.
  
  Thanks for reading!
DampKitten
2 years ago

Yeah, well I’ve kind of been missing you, and you know how I get.
Thanks for checking on this, sweetie.

Kisses!
xoxoxo
DampKitten
2 years ago

I’m glad you liked it. I don’t just let anybody kill me…
but I have to admit that I liked it
Atticus Abbey
2 years ago

I don’t much care for stampeding herd on the other site. I have been on almost all the sites. I was a moderator at one time on several now-defunct sites. As a bookshop owner, I detest censorship.
DampKitten
2 years ago

I agree.

DampKitten
2 years ago

Wow, so I get to make the first comment.
You’re an excellent writer, and this is extremely romantic. I love how you intertwine the opulent atmosphere with food and sex. You have upscale experience in all departments. The imagery is fab. The food is exquisite. The drinks are maybe a little over the top for your average person with an average liver (many of us average folk would be on the floor)… but it works for the story. This is Cinderella level fantasy with an erotic twist. I read your first story, so I kind of know the backdrop on the relationship.

The music you mention is slightly dated, which is a casual observation on my part. I know these songs, but mainly from the office soft rock settings. I will say that I love literature that mentions music as a way of emphasizing mood and era. I think it works well in your piece. Your vocabulary is extensive and descriptive. This is a pleasurable read.

xoxo
- elan
  2 years ago
  
  Hi . Music is probably a bit dated. Not sure that Dua Lipa would work so well though!
  I tend to “bank” the songs when I’m listening to the radio btw!
  - DampKitten
    2 years ago
    
    I love me some Dua. You can actually find some pieces that have a romantic flare. Billy Eilish has that subliminal seductive quality and Lana Del Rey is a favorite.

Toro
2 years ago

F’king Fabulous!
Superb poem, lovely flow and excellent rhyming.

Blazing hot arousing descriptions which i can easily visualise!

Mistress Fia sounds awesome!
- DampKitten
  2 years ago
  
  She is awesome, Toro. You’re awesome too! Thanks so much for reading this, and I hope you shot cum all over your laptop. You know, I can sit on top of your lap too.
  - Toro
    2 years ago
    
    Damn girl!!!
DampKitten
2 years ago

Thank you so much, Karen! Kisses to you for that!
DampKitten
2 years ago

Of course I did…
and you taste so good too